Thursday, February 9, 2012

The Beach

It was a dim day at the beach, my teeth started chattering and goose bumps started appearing on my arms. Wrapped in a blanket I watched the waves clash against each other spraying everywhere. “Whoa!” I yelled as a heap of water splashed on top of me. That was an exhausting day at the beach.


  1. Hi Jarna

    Wow I really liked the way you had impression on your story. When I was reading your story I could feel how you were feeling when a heap of water splashed on top of you. Probably next time read you story then see if their are any spelling mistakes other than that is was excellent!

    Keep up the great work!

  2. Hi Jarna

    wow i really liked your story you write on your blog about cold at the beach when i was reading it was so awesome.


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