Tuesday, March 20, 2012
Show Not Tell - Table Tennis
‘Whack!’ The ball went flying towards my opponent. Feeling pleased I said to my self, ”It’s over.” Over confidently I turned my back thinking I had won, ‘Smack’ I turned around to late just as the ball shot across the table and on to the floor. I could not believe I had lost.
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Hello Jarna,
ReplyDeleteWhat a really good paragraph Jarna.
I can tell that you showed not told.
Keep up the good work.
Tina.