Tuesday, March 20, 2012

Show Not Tell - Table Tennis

‘Whack!’ The ball went flying towards my opponent. Feeling pleased I said to my self, ”It’s over.” Over confidently I turned my back thinking I had won, ‘Smack’ I turned around to late just as the ball shot across the table and on to the floor. I could not believe I had lost.

1 comment:

  1. Hello Jarna,

    What a really good paragraph Jarna.
    I can tell that you showed not told.
    Keep up the good work.



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